6th Lesson.
November 26, 2007
damn it. i miss the shuttle bus just by that few seconds again. what an unlucky day. but, thanks Leslie (for giving me the chance!
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allow others to read my first draft. still waiting for 2 other copies to come back.
ummm. if i don’t remember wrongly, the lesson was about not only writing once but many times. it’s not just editing; it’s re-writing. i personally feel that editted stuffs are often not as “original” as the first. I mean, the kind of feeling isn’t as good as the first. but then again, if we’re able to receive comments, we can twist another story out to make a better story. so maybe re-writing might do much much much much better. ahhh!!! now my butt seems to stuck on the fence!
watched a short animation. lol! wth! 3 Feets Apart- I kinda like it. At first I found it rather irritating. why the hell would someone be unable to stand near a person?! umm.. so the characters are stupid. like why the hell would the children have electronic gadgets on them sia… lol. ok, ok.. i know we should think out of the box. but the parents don’t have it mah! still, sweet ending. i empathize with the couples…
alright. so let’s hope my final draft works out. tata!