Proposal  I
After spending two weeks in Cambodia, Joy is worn out. Kenneth, on the other hand, is very excited about her return. He is going to give her a surprise. He starts the engine of the car and asks “Honey, how was the retreat?” But he realises she has fallen asleep.

Proposal II
She rushes him to be quick as it is awkward to wait alone in the restaurant. Kenneth quickly arranges the flowers for the last time, and jog towards the venue. He opens the cover of the notebook she gave him a year back and asks shyly “Will You Marry Me?”

Learning in progress.
Sunday is the day I bring Bubble for behavioural training. Today, as usual, Bubble sniffs them and wags her tail happily. Betty, a dog who never likes Bubble, has come. They stare at each other and growl. I worry something bad might happen… Within a second, Betty pounces on Bubble.

Clumsy and Cash
“Shit! Where could I drop it?” Kang Chee questions herself. It is the third time this has happened to her. She walks out of the locker room and flips through every compartment of her bag. Everything except that is still in there. Where could it be- her fifty dollar bill?

Under those leaves.
Kit Keong walks briskly towards the lift. He feels something staring at him so he turns and look at the tree. To his horror, he sees a girl who is sitting on one of the brunch. She lifts up her head… “Oh My God!” Kit Keong runs up the stairs.

7 Responses to “50 Words Stories”

  1. charischx said

    Are you hinting about your dog in “learning in progress”? lol

    Like the first 2 stories.. how you manage to link them? So cretive. haha

  2. Mia, lovely said

    like all of them lah! lol. was unable to complete the first one. therefore, like this lor.

  3. lordas88 said

    The first one is good. So amazing that you could link 2 stories together. :)

  4. theredpants said

    Very good overall – I like the 1st one very much.

  5. rting said

    i don’t know why, but i prefer the last one. hahahaha… i go for goofy stuffs. =P COOL STORIES. ^^

  6. Mia, lovely said

    thank you!

  7. theredpants said

    Pretty good control of your writing to achieve stories in 50 words. Didn’t find story 3 very interesting though.

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